question 3 feedback

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Published on February 21, 2016

Author: sevcan97

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Slide1: FEEDBACK – DRAFT 2 Slide2: I ASKED A COUPLE OF THE TYPICAL TARGET AUDIENCES ABOUT THEIR OPINION ON THE SECOND DRAFT ON THE TRAILER AND RECORDED THEIR ANSWERS. Slide3: Question 1 WHAT DO YOU LIKE ABOUT THE TRAILER SO FAR? THERE ARE SHOTS MISSING BUT I UNDERSTAND THE OVERALL NARRATIVE. I LIKE THE IDEA OF ‘IT CAN KILL’ APPEARING ON THE SCREEN ONE AFTER THE OTHER. I LIKED IT WHEN THE KILLER SCRAPS THE KNIFE ON THE WALL BECAUSE I SAW A COUPLE OF BLOOD DROPS, WHICH MADE ME FEEL TERRIFIED. I THINK THE PART WHERE WE SEE THE KILLER IN THE SAME SHOT AS THE VICTIM WAS GOOD, AS THERE WAS SLOW MOTION USED, WHICH MADE ME THINK SOMETHING BAD WAS GOING TO HAPPEN. QUESTION 2 WHAT DO YOU THINK NEEDS IMPROVEMENT? I DIDN ’ T GET THE FEEL THAT IT WAS A TRAILER AT THE START, SO MAYBE IT COULD SART DIFFERENTLY. AN EFFECT COULD BE USED AT THE START SO IT STARTS SMOOTHLY. I DIDN ’ T REALLY LIKE THE TITLES IN THE TRAILER, MAYBE THAT COULD BE CHANGED. I DON ’ T THINK THE FONT OF THE TITLE WORKED WELL (FOR THE TITE OF THE FILM AND THE OTHER ONES). Slide4: Question 1 WHAT DO YOU LIKE ABOUT THE TRAILER SO FAR? THERE ARE SHOTS MISSING BUT I UNDERSTAND THE OVERALL NARRATIVE. I LIKE THE IDEA OF ‘IT CAN KILL’ APPEARING ON THE SCREEN ONE AFTER THE OTHER. I LIKED IT WHEN THE KILLER SCRAPS THE KNIFE ON THE WALL BECAUSE I SAW A COUPLE OF BLOOD DROPS, WHICH MADE ME FEEL TERRIFIED. I THINK THE PART WHERE WE SEE THE KILLER IN THE SAME SHOT AS THE VICTIM WAS GOOD, AS THERE WAS SLOW MOTION USED, WHICH MADE ME THINK SOMETHING BAD WAS GOING TO HAPPEN. We kept ‘it can kill’ appear on the screen at different times but we could not change the color of the word ‘kill’ , which would have been better. W e kept the slow motion to create suspense, and we added slow motion in the second killing. I kept the killer scraping scene because it created suspense. Slide5: QUESTION 2 WHAT DO YOU THINK NEEDS IMPROVEMENT? I DIDN ’ T GET THE FEEL THAT IT WAS A TRAILER AT THE START, SO MAYBE IT COULD SART DIFFERENTLY. AN EFFECT COULD BE USED AT THE START SO IT STARTS SMOOTHLY. I DIDN ’ T REALLY LIKE THE TITLES IN THE TRAILER, MAYBE THAT COULD BE CHANGED. I DON ’ T THINK THE FONT OF THE TITLE WORKED WELL (FOR THE TITE OF THE FILM AND THE OTHER ONES). I realized that the start of the trailer it did not look like a trailer, so I looked at a couple of trailer and realized they started of with the age rating and the production logo, so I added the logo on the third draft and the age rating on the fourth. I also added an effect at the start, so it flows better. My group and I also changed the font of the titles by using after effects. As a group, we chose the font then added effects.

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